Good work here on the representation of your main characters. The social groups that you have intended to target have been addressed well and you comment on how you did this through your characters, narrative and themes. Good research into representation is also evident and how these have influenced your choices and outcomes. Work is very well presented too.
To improve: - Comparison to existing products is needed which will show your understanding of genre and audience expectations.
Good work here on the representation of your main characters. The social groups that you have intended to target have been addressed well and you comment on how you did this through your characters, narrative and themes. Good research into representation is also evident and how these have influenced your choices and outcomes. Work is very well presented too.
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- Comparison to existing products is needed which will show your understanding of genre and audience expectations.